Friday, July 13, 2012


cumulus

generous and expanding
white's brilliant reflection..
many shaded towers
edges enclose with
high definition..
sometimes
a precursor to unwelcome
beauty..
hailstones
waterspouts
tornados..
we too
accumulate faces...
a work in progress..changed the ending this morning...poem starts with
undifferentiated whiteness, following with edges and definition, then the
beautiful but dangerous aspects...culminating in the similarity with our own
various faces...still working!

1 comment:

  1. Beautiful poem, May I ask what it was you changed about the ending?
    Eileen

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